You have had a bank account for a few years. Recently you received a letter from the bank stating that your account is 240 dollars overdrawn and that you will be charged 70 dollars which will be taken directly from your account. You know that this information is incorrect.
Write a letter to the bank. Explain what has happened and say what you would like them to do about it.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to with regards to the communication I have received from the bank recently, which has mentioned that I will be charged with the amount of 70 dollars for the overdrawn money of 240 dollars. However, I would request you there is a mistake on the transaction.
As you might be aware that I have changed my accommodation this month and informed the bank also, so that owner of the previous house should not take the money from my account directly, which is exactly 240 dollars. However, I would request you to further verify the transaction so that I can request my previous owner to return back the money.
Moreover, please create the link between my new owner’s account and my account so that the transaction can be carried out easily. Later after your response, I will communicate with my previous room owner to return the amount in my same account.
I look forward to receive your response.
Yours faithfully,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to with regards...
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Line 5, column 323, Rule ID: RETURN_BACK[1]
Message: Use simply 'return'.
Suggestion: return
...that I can request my previous owner to return back the money. Moreover, please create ...
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Line 9, column 16, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to receiving'.
Suggestion: to receiving
...t in my same account. I look forward to receive your response. Yours faithfully, V...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eive your response. Yours faithfully, Vishal Bhat
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85119047619 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6756266882 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577380952381 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 239.4 290.88556701 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0234335208 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.875 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 4.34317383033 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348021090001 0.216113520407 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137400161594 0.0766984524023 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791983420033 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198820815474 0.12726935374 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976427697281 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 8.37731958763 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 7.59969072165 104% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.