You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home. You want to give your opinion about this. Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter
1. Explain how you learnt about these plans
2. Say what you think of the park
3. Give your opinion on the plans
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to bring to your notice that there is the planning of authorities to build the multistory building in the place of the park which is the only vacant area for the civilians of many areas like SBP homes, acme heights and many more.
Many children from the nearby area play in the park in the evening and it the ideal place yoga and morning walks of elders also. Greenery in the park is also extremely soothing and relaxing for individuals who want to perform meditation. Moreover, park makes the area lively and helps the people of the community to stay connected with each other.
I think the plan of constructing the apartments in the place of park is not at all a great idea as this hamper the community life to the great extant and make the no place left of the social and physical activities. Request you to make the public and government aware about the negative repercussions of the plan by publishing the article on this topic in your esteem newspaper.
Hope to receive the positive response from you.
Yours faithfully
Maninder
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 124, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
... place yoga and morning walks of elders also. Greenery in the park is also extremely...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 32.9175257732 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 905.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 191.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73821989529 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71756304063 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50792444893 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602094240838 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 76.839117642 44.8134815571 171% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.125 76.5299724578 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.875 16.8248392259 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 4.34317383033 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262151477972 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105459570131 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862404291536 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133223766698 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0724206948143 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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