You have just bought a new wardrobe from a mail order company. Unfortunately when it arrived you found that one of the doors was missing.
In your letter:
Give the company your reference number and purchase date
Explain what the problem is
Say what you would like the company to do
You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction regarding the wardrobe that I recently purchase from your online store (ref number 32145). I placed the order on 20th November and received the delivery on 27th November.
At first it looked perfectly fine on the outside and matched the description given on the website. However, once you open the main door, and get to the secret compartment, which is supposed to be a locker to store valuables, I found the door missing. This is supposed to be the most important feature of the wardrobe and I had planned to keep my important documents such as my passport, rent documents and other essentials in there. Next I am sharing my room with a roommate and we both work during the day so the house is left unguarded. It is risky to have a locker without a door.
Therefore, I would be grateful if you could send a person at the earliest to fix the door. I am available tomorrow. Please give me a call at 6354128 before coming so that I can clear the space.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Mary Smith
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2019-11-27 | coolchris2100 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 896.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.59487179487 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66668639046 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651282051282 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2600874342 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6666666667 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.25 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168896257376 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0554766145527 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468992031001 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934860909855 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248472950543 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.