You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
● tell him/her how you found out
● explain how you feel about the news
● organise to meet your friend for a celebration.
Dear Jay,
I’m fine, and I hope you are doing good too. I'm writing this letter to congratulate you on being in a relationship.
Yesterday, I went to university to collect my degree and transcript, where I meet Sam who is your neighbor. He was there for the same purpose and he told me that last week you've got engaged with Sara.
I'm so delighted after hearing this news, and I've no words to express my happiness and joy for you. Sara is such a nice lady; I know her because she was our classmate too. You both complement each other, may God bless you both.
I'd like to invite you this weekend, at my home, so that can celebrate this moment of joy. I'm planning to make dinner by myself and I'd made your favorite dishes. Kindly let me know about your plans so that I can make some arrangements.
Best wishes.
Maryam Khan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ach other, may God bless you both. Id like to invite you this weekend, at my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 706.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 155.0 206.0 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55483870968 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41167814337 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.729032258065 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.9376724857 44.8134815571 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.6 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.7 4.34317383033 16% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207920465088 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648369684032 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443976792566 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118427446292 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242298078234 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.81 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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