You have just learned that your friend has recently become engaged.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter
● tell him/her how you found out
● explain how you feel about the news
● organise to meet your friend for a celebration.
Dear Elaine,
I hope you doing fine, I'm writing this letter to congratulate you on your engagement with Jason.
Two days ago, I saw a picture of your engagement on Jason's profile. I must say you both were looking amazing in those beautiful traditional attires. I'd be happier if you have told me yourself since we are friends for a long time.
I was over the moon to hear about this and I still remember our college days when you and Jason started dating each other. I always said you both make a very cute couple and I'm very happy that you are hitched with the love of your life.
We should meet plan a meet up to celebrate your engagement and we have not met for a couple of months. I'll invite Jason and some of our college friends as well and we can go for dinner at our favorite restaurant the Reef. Please let me know if you are available next weekend.
See you soon,
Priyanka Tuli
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Elaine, I hope you doing fine, Im writing this letter to congratulate you...
^^
Line 4, column 150, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...in those beautiful traditional attires. Id be happier if you have told me yourself...
^^
Line 6, column 175, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...id you both make a very cute couple and Im very happy that you are hitched with th...
^^
Line 8, column 104, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...we have not met for a couple of months. Ill invite Jason and some of our college fr...
^^^
Line 9, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e available next weekend. See you soon, Priyanka Tuli
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, still, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 732.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33136094675 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24838056243 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656804733728 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.3809462067 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312251356262 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114713488119 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537707468751 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194407611165 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319354165103 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.67 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.