You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr. James,
My name is Omer. Me, my wife and our two daughters have moved from Melbourne to your next property in last week. My wife who is student in RMIT and daughters who are students in primary school are going to their schools every weekday morning noisy, perhaps you noticed them.
We intend to meet our neighbours. That’s why we are planning to organise a party in our backyard next week. We would like to invite you. Other participants are some of our relatives, friends and neighbours as well. Party going to commence with cocktail. It is a good chance to know each together. Dinner will be served before the afterwards. Also, the party will include little movie and music show to our children. We thought that they will have a good time. However, I am worried due to music show create noise. I apologise for any inconvenience in advance.
I am looking forward to your visit.
Yours Sincerely
Omer Otcu
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 159, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
...fe who is student in RMIT and daughters who are students in primary school are going to...
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Line 3, column 276, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orning noisy, perhaps you noticed them. We intend to meet our neighbours. That’s...
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Line 5, column 562, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ogise for any inconvenience in advance. I am looking forward to your visit. Y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 163.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73619631902 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57311423478 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4652807637 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.687116564417 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 290.88556701 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2527606937 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 48.25 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.1875 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0625 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19985845887 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576843148513 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0566373747078 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11916603375 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305510203186 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.73 8.71597938144 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.