You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter:
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir,
I am writing to you to express my disappointment about incorrect article of Kuba Town in Maldives on the “New on the Air” magazine published last Month. Because of this inaccuracy information circulated on the magazine not only impact our town popularity but also tourist sight-seeing. Therefore, as a recovery, I strongly recommend to publish the real news on the page of the magazine that I believe it would reach readers.
I am one of your magazine fan to learn about the myriad of Tourism place across the world. It gives enormous knowledge and aids to the explorer who is backpacking to fly around the world. On the last month release when I saw about a small famous Kuba Town in Maldives, I was so fascinated to continue reading but then while in middle of reading I realized some wrong information about the shark attack in the sunny beach and it is red flagged by the government which is absolutely false. Perhaps, there was an incident have had happened a decade ago but after implementing many safety measures it is now under control.
Thus, I need correction about this article and publish it on the front page in the following magazine before I make a legal approach.
Thanks for your prompt action on this matter.
Yours faithfully,
Yusa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 324, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommend publishing'.
Suggestion: recommend publishing
...g. Therefore, as a recovery, I strongly recommend to publish the real news on the page of the magazi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, then, therefore, thus, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1065.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84090909091 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72795067331 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631818181818 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 290.88556701 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.6843776565 44.8134815571 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304850707114 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0964453791455 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517286598927 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145743402426 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534154810151 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.