You have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect.
Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
correct the information in the article
explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
suggest what the magazine should do about this situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to inform you that the an article published in your paper has wrong information and must be corrected. In the issue, published on 15 January 2021 an article was published on the Air force museum which stated that it displays a wide array of airplanes from the war period. Whereas the atual information should be it displays a wide array of aircrafts from the war period. Though the mistake is a minute one but it makes a huge difference in the actual idea.
If the information provided by media is not accurate, it may mislead the general public, especially the children who reads your paper on a daily basis. In addition, your organisation may face heavy penalty on the same account.
However, I understand that the article has already been published and many copies have been already sold in the market. May I suggest that you should rectify the error in the online portals so that those who read newspapers online get the appropriate information. Furthermore, kindly ensure that the artcles are proofread before sending them out for publishing.
Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to seeing the suggested measures taken into action.
Yours faithfully
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 33, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...Madam, I am writing to inform you that the an article published in your paper has wro...
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Line 2, column 286, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...array of airplanes from the war period. Whereas the atual information should be it disp...
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Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...dia is not accurate, it may mislead the general public, especially the children who reads you...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y mislead the general public, especially the children who reads your paper on a d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92195121951 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71365989574 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634146341463 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3059909418 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0833333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0833333333 16.8248392259 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 4.34317383033 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227750860306 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0746244798935 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732855528629 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109358423387 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052575459937 0.0580467560999 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 8.37731958763 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.