You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday .When you got home , you realized you had left your wallet there.
1)thank you your friend for the holiday
2)explain that you left your wallet in their house
3)give them instruction of how to send back to you.
Dear Samy,
How is all going? hope everything's fine at your end. I would like to thank you for the wonderful time we had at the Maldives. I really enjoyed my one weeks holiday thoroughly. it was quite relaxing and peaceful away from all the hectic schedules. I must admit that seafood in the Maldives was extremely delicious. Also, the beach outing we had is just unforgettable.
I am afraid that I need to bother you for a while. Let me explain you in detail. I have left my wallet in your room during our vacation. It has my employee id card, my credit cards along with cash of 500usd. I had kept it inside the safety locker of your cupboard.
i would like to suggest you to kindly courier my wallet through DTDC courier services, possibly by today afternoon. As, they are the fastest courier services I can get my wallet hopefully by tomorrow evening. As such, it shall not be a problem for me while reporting to the office.
hope to see you soon.
your friend,
Shane.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 19, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
Dear Samy, How is all going? hope everythings fine at your end. I would l...
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Line 2, column 177, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...njoyed my one weeks holiday thoroughly. it was quite relaxing and peaceful away fr...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I
... the safety locker of your cupboard. i would like to suggest you to kindly cou...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... the safety locker of your cupboard. i would like to suggest you to kindly cou...
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Line 6, column 100, Rule ID: TODAY_MORNING[1]
Message: This is a non-standard collocation. Normally, 'this afternoon' is used.
Suggestion: this afternoon
...ough DTDC courier services, possibly by today afternoon. As, they are the fastest courier servi...
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Line 6, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... services, possibly by today afternoon. As, they are the fastest courier services ...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Hope
...or me while reporting to the office. hope to see you soon. your friend, Shane...
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Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Your
...the office. hope to see you soon. your friend, Shane.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, really, so, while, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.51396648045 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47787878528 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.675977653631 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.6695811739 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 47.5294117647 76.5299724578 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.5294117647 16.8248392259 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11764705882 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.333254259777 0.216113520407 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097752006754 0.0766984524023 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798671216387 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187441991078 0.12726935374 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0646765433713 0.0580467560999 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.1 8.37731958763 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.69 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.22 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 3.5 8.62886597938 41% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.