You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday .When you got home , you realized you had left your wallet there.1)thank you your friend for the holiday2)explain that you left your wallet in their house3)give them instruction of how to send back to yo

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You have just spend a week with a friend on holiday .When you got home , you realized you had left your wallet there.

1)thank you your friend for the holiday
2)explain that you left your wallet in their house
3)give them instruction of how to send back to you.

Dear ABC,

I want to say Thank you for spending a wonder holidays with me . It was one of the best and unforgettable trip i had with you.After reaching home i suddenly realized that i have forgotten the wallet into your house.The place where i forgot my wallet is under the table of your room .

There are some important cards in my wallet which i have to use it for a daily routine .Because of no wallet i am facing problem every now and then and it creates hurdle me for the utilization of monthly expenses.

I would request you to send back to me as soon as possible so that i will not face any problem .I would be very thankful to you in this regard.

Regards,
Yours friend
Muhammad Tahir Hussain

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... one of the best and unforgettable trip i had with you.After reaching home i sudd...
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...ve forgotten the wallet into your house.The place where i forgot my wallet is under...
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...y wallet is under the table of your room . There are some important cards in my...
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...ich i have to use it for a daily routine .Because of no wallet i am facing problem...
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Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 584.0 937.175257732 62% => OK
No of words: 133.0 206.0 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.39097744361 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.39596269041 3.78020617076 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40433992607 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 127.690721649 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.699248120301 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 182.7 290.88556701 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 12.6804123711 39% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.606321552 44.8134815571 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 16.8248392259 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.6 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.39158460294 0.216113520407 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.186884968881 0.0766984524023 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732851559352 0.0603063233224 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165727354329 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.142101207876 0.0580467560999 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 8.62886597938 203% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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