You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. when you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there.
write a letter to your friend, in your letter"
thank your friend for the holiday
explain that you left your wallet in their house
give them instructions of how how to send it back to you
Dear ABC,
It was nice meeting you after very long time, and during my stay in Allahabad. I am pleased with your hospitality and love shown during my stay, so far, it is the most memorable holidays I had in recent years. The way we have explored the places and fun activities we did together, I'll always have sweet memory of it.
I reached Delhi yesterday, while unpacking my baggage, i realized, my wallet was left at your wardrob in guest room. It has my driving license and PAN card, which are really important documents.
My uncle is also visiting Allahabad, and he will be back here by coming Sunday. Would it be possible for you to give my stuff ti by Friday? His train will depart on Saturday early morning, I'll collect wallet from him as soon he reaches here.
I look forward to hearing back from you and definetely spending quality time next year during my vacations.
Best Wishes
XYZ
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 283, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...ces and fun activities we did together, Ill always have sweet memory of it. I re...
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Line 4, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ys have sweet memory of it. I reached Delhi yesterday, while unpacking my bagg...
^^
Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... yesterday, while unpacking my baggage, i realized, my wallet was left at your wa...
^
Line 6, column 190, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
... will depart on Saturday early morning, Ill collect wallet from him as soon he reac...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 747.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 162.0 206.0 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61111111111 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37590178934 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.746913580247 0.622605031667 120% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1826875044 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.9 4.34317383033 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164240384232 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560462616072 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488127640134 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0925586495254 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0248207250374 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.