You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines about:
--Explain what happened.
--Describe your luggage and
--Tell them what was in it.
--Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am abc xyz, on 10th of may 2019, I travelled by air Asia plane from india to london. I am writing this letter to enquire about the luggage which got lost during the travel.
my flight was at 10 p.m. from New Delhi, india to Heathrow, london. I handed over my stuff while i did check-in at the Priority Customer counter at airline counter. When I reached Heathrow Airport, next day morning at 7 a.m., I did not receive one of my luggage bag on conveyor belt.
the bag was of American Tourister Company, red color. it had big logo of usa prined on front because it was anniversary edition bag. Zip's were of blue color, and wheels also had usa logo embedded in it. On back side of it, my name, home address were written on it. bag had my clothes, official documents, perfumes, footwear (Puma sneakers), sunglasses (IDE) and toiletries.
it has been 2 weeks already, air lines did not contact me to share any update on it. I would be grateful if you could give me information about it.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully
abc xyz
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...ge which got lost during the travel. my flight was at 10 p.m. from New Delhi, i...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...w, london. I handed over my stuff while i did check-in at the Priority Customer c...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
....m., I did not receive one of my luggage bag on conveyor belt. the bag was o...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
... my luggage bag on conveyor belt. the bag was of American Tourister Company, ...
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Suggestion: It
... American Tourister Company, red color. it had big logo of usa prined on front bec...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...rs, sunglasses IDE and toiletries. it has been 2 weeks already, air lines did...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 196.0 206.0 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5612244898 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42443052906 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.69387755102 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.6408674119 44.8134815571 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.8571428571 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.14285714286 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185774775867 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615172300941 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0365453548661 0.0603063233224 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.093559986611 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0261767758537 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.