You travelled by plane last week and your luggage was lost. You have still heard nothing from the airline company. Write to the airlines about:
--Explain what happened.
--Describe your luggage and
--Tell them what was in it.
--Find out what they are going to do about it.
Dear ab airlines
I am writing this letter to tell you about my problem and hope to receive your response.
Last week, i had a plane trip of ab airline and when i arrived, my luggage was lost. I checked it in already but the moment i reported to the ground staff, there was no support. my luggage was a pink vali. Inside it was my clothes, my documents especially my laptop. Until 3 days after i presenting, i have not get my baggage. Your services made me unsatisfied. I departed at 7 pm on Monday to China, please check out my trip and find out my vali as soon as possible. Thank you for your help.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Alice
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear ab airlines I am writing this letter to tell you abo...
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Line 5, column 12, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...to receive your response. Last week, i had a plane trip of ab airline and when...
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Line 5, column 54, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...had a plane trip of ab airline and when i arrived, my luggage was lost. I checked...
^
Line 5, column 125, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... I checked it in already but the moment i reported to the ground staff, there was...
^
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...the ground staff, there was no support. my luggage was a pink vali. Inside it was ...
^^
Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: I_AM[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I am'?
Suggestion: I am
...specially my laptop. Until 3 days after i presenting, i have not get my baggage. ...
^
Line 5, column 312, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'got', 'gotten'.
Suggestion: got; gotten
...l 3 days after i presenting, i have not get my baggage. Your services made me unsat...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 533.0 937.175257732 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 126.0 206.0 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23015873016 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.35036895883 3.78020617076 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44414809583 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 127.690721649 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.706349206349 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 167.4 290.88556701 58% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.391446165 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.3 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.3 4.34317383033 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251020811393 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105441873965 0.0766984524023 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698976482652 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151547043405 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420092866709 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.