Dear Gargi,
Hope you are in best of spirits and good health. It was a splendid experience to meet your friends last evening at your place.
Firstly, thank you for inviting me over to your place for the party. We should should certainly have more parties like this going forward. Secondly, as it was quite late in the evening, apparently I have left my black color blazer in your room besides the study table. Its texture is muslin silk that is the reason it has a shiny look. I think we were surfing net before I left for my place, so it would be still hanging in there.
Additionally, I usually keep a variety of things in my pocket such as notes, cash, ornaments and my favorite lipstick. Moreover, I have spend quite a substantial amount of money on them. Although the gold bangle inside the pocket of my blazer is gifted by my mother, I have equally shared the cost with her. She will be extremely furious if she were to find out that my bangle is missing. Therefore, is it possible to collect from you either tonight or latest by tomorrow morning?
Lastly, do you think we can meet tonight for dinner and you can pass me my blazer? Let me know your availability and convenience.
Warm regards
Nur Amirah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: should
...me over to your place for the party. We should should certainly have more parties like this g...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'spent'.
Suggestion: spent
... my favorite lipstick. Moreover, I have spend quite a substantial amount of money on ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, first, firstly, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.52702702703 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39777190761 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653153153153 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.0599334811 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.0 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.06666666667 4.34317383033 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178980615367 0.216113520407 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553180998862 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468154422121 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122051536173 0.12726935374 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0374988450731 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.4 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.