You have just spent a weekend at a friend’s house. When you returned home, you discovered you have left a coat containing some belongings in his house.
Write a letter to your friend telling him that you left the coat.
Tell him what the coat looks like.
Where you think you left it and what was inside it.
Make some suggestions about how to get it back.
Dear John,
I really enjoyed weekend with you and your family. Now I am back at home safely. You always be my best friend.
When I came back home, I realized that I forgot my coat at your house. It is navy blue coat with thin black stripe in it. I think I left coat in the guest room on the dressing table. There are some stuff such as wallet, winter gloves, and hat inside my coat. Luckily, I had some cash in my jeans pocket which helped me to reach my home.
I really need my wallet urgent because it has my driving license and credit cards. One of my colleagues leave next to your street and he commutes to everyday work. I would be grateful if you can give my stuff to him and then he would deliver to me. If you don't get time then I will ask my colleague stop by at your home and pick up my stuff while driving to work.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best regards,
Peter
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'be'.
Suggestion: be always
...mily. Now I am back at home safely. You always be my best friend. When I came back home,...
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Line 5, column 257, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...and then he would deliver to me. If you dont get time then I will ask my colleague s...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, then, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 724.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.06741573034 4.54256449028 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95137196451 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.2740085899 44.8134815571 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 51.7142857143 76.5299724578 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.7142857143 16.8248392259 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 4.34317383033 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26262564529 0.216113520407 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959435703892 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0684134520353 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180390338694 0.12726935374 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545803436852 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.1 8.37731958763 49% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 93.14 70.7449484536 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.3 7.45979381443 44% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.44 8.71597938144 62% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.18 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 41.2886597938 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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