Space exploration is much expensive and money should be spent on more important things.
What is your opinion?
Universe is full of mysteries and for any nation to explore universe, space programs are required and it is very costly. For any country, exploring universe will give answers if there are any human living outside of earth and it is really necessity of human kind. However, economic development of that county is also necessary. In my opinion, universe exploration is required but economic growth of people is also important.
To explore the universe, space programs required and which are not cheap. With out space programs we would not have knowledge about out side of earth. We would not have known about moon and mars with out this programs. Now a days, few countries are set aside certain portion of their budget for space programs. For instance, country like India, they put some portion of their budget set aside for the space exploration. Information out side of earth is really required to know for human race.
However, economic development of country is also really necessary of any country. For any country to start space programs, there are certain basic necessary things to consider like food, shelter and economic development of country. For example, around 3 decades ago, United states of America spent adequate portion from their budget on space programs so that they face recession on that time. For this reasons, country has spend enough on basic necessary things for human race.
In conclusion, space programs are required to get more information outside of earth but basic necessity is important for to survive human kind. In my opinion, for any nation has to spend more on basic necessary things than universe exploration.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Without
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Suggestion: without
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, really, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07720588235 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51517614712 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.452205882353 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9232290317 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.3125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108035226603 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449377026933 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398105684824 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803847947677 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032450539873 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.15 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.