You have lost and item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
- Describe the item
- Explain where & when you left it
- Say what action you would like the company to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to inform you about my laptop, which I mistakenly left on the train, while I was travelling from Central station to Downtown on Jan 13, 2019.
I lost a laptop of HP make, which is a model from HP3200 series. It is a black color laptop with fifteen inches screen and is in a grey sling laptop bag. Additionally, as an identification mark I have my name initials AJ on the bottom left of the gadget’s screen.
After reconfirming from my travel ticket, I missed the belonging in the C-3 coach of the train. I assume I forget to pick the bag, as I was in haste to get down at the station considering the fact that the train stops at the Downtown station for only five minutes.
In case you trace my belonging, I request you to give me a call on the suggested mobile number mentioned on the lost and found form, enclosed herewith.
Looking forward for your response.
Yours faithfully
Alex Jhonson
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 784.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 172.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55813953488 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62144681703 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64917305995 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651162790698 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 229.5 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9874153813 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1111111111 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.11111111111 4.34317383033 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158878555603 0.216113520407 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055528242678 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519890071945 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824874414879 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580898581412 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 70.7449484536 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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