You have lost an item of value on a train.
Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
describe the item
explain where and when you left it
say what action you would like the company to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in order to inform you about an item that I have left while traveling on your train. I will remain ever grateful if you can help me out to get my item.
The item is a blue-colored trolley bag. In size the bag is 24 inches in height and has a logo of 'VIP' written on the left corner in the front side of the bag. Inside the bag I have some valueable products such as a laptop, some documents and a few clothes. I have left the bag under the seat no. '2A' of cabin 'D' in 'Sonar Bangla' train, that left Dhaka for Sylhet on thursday of last week. Due to the delayed schedule of the train we reached Sylhet very late at night. I was heavy-eyed from the hectic day and, I entirely forgot to take the bag which I kept under the seat. I will appreciate if you kindly look for the bag and send it at my mentioned address.
It is very important for me to get the bag specially because of the documents inside the bag. Please look into the issue urgently.
Sincerely Yours,
Tabassum Zaman
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| 2022-05-31 | mehjabin | 42 | view |
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| 2021-07-28 | Tabassum Zaman | 61 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in order to inf...
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Line 9, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... the issue urgently. Sincerely Yours, Tabassum Zaman
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15075376884 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20266796591 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603015075377 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1801298322 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.5384615385 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3076923077 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186547414292 0.216113520407 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621901494695 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086200430165 0.0603063233224 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144827697166 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141965661843 0.0580467560999 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.2 8.71597938144 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.84 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.