You have lost an item of value on a train.
Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter
describe the item
explain where and when you left it
say what action you would like the company to take
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Sir or Madam,
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well.
I am writing this letter with regards to my important valuable loss of an item on a train. I lost my folder of documents which had original documents in it including the passport. I request you to kindly look in this matter urgently.
I boarded the train from Hyderabad to Mumbai on 20th of June, Wednesday at 5 pm and got down at Kalyan station near around 11 pm on the same night. My Seat was 20AC upper berth. I am sure that I have left the folder on my seat as I took out for some reason. It was A4 size turquoise colour folder with XYZ name and contact no written on it.
I have to fly to Canada on 15th July and I will be in big trouble if I would be able to find the item. I am expecting an assistance from the Railway team as you can help me find my set of documents. Therefore, again requesting to consider my situation as critical and kindly help me find my folder as soon as possible.
If you get any source please connect me on +1435355252 or on mail id: hhahha@hhs.com. I can pickup the item found.
Yours sincerely,
Mp
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...documents in it including the passport. I request you to kindly look in this matt...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... kindly look in this matter urgently. I boarded the train from Hyderabad to Mum...
^
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...tical and kindly help me find my folder as soon as possible. If you get any sourc...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 209.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.17703349282 4.54256449028 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48177348927 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631578947368 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0968086101 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.3571428571 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9285714286 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07142857143 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209601914109 0.216113520407 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0670943615323 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570746758863 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127971968373 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0579488134007 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.37 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.