You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter•advise them of your situation•explain how this is affecting you•request a new card

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You have lost your student identification card. This has created some problems for you.
Write a letter to the director of student services. In your letter
• advise them of your situation
• explain how this is affecting you
• request a new card

Dear Mr. Ken

Allow me to introduce myself. my name is Alex tran, a first year student at Tampere university. I'm writing with regards to the lost of my stud<a>than</a>ent card that caused troublesome to my student life.

Let me explain the situation. I only came into realization of the card disappearance couple of days ago after finishing my Strategy workshop. Perhaps the card was dropped somehow on the bus I took that day. I was in a hurry that literally nothing catched my attention.

As you are aware of the functionality of the student card, I have had experienced difficulties in paper printing as I had to manually type in my username and password instead of just placing the card on the card reader. Likewise, the library also does not permit any borrowing without a student card. To make it worse, I failed to receive a 40% discount applicable for student when I dined at the university cafeteria. Such experiences have made my student life more miserable, especially when I'm living on a budget currently.

I would be grateful if you can proceed to provide me with a new card. Understand that it's only one week before Christmas, but I need to grab some Finance books to study for the exam after holiday season.

Much appreciated in advance for your support.

regards,

alex tran

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... caused troublesome to my student life. Let me explain the situation. I only cam...
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...literally nothing catched my attention. As you are aware of the functionality of...
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...y when Im living on a budget currently. I would be grateful if you can proceed t...
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...tudy for the exam after holiday season. Much appreciated in advance for your sup...
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...n advance for your support. regards, alex tran
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, likewise, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90336203583 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657777777778 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1791102727 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.6 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.26666666667 4.34317383033 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234354243457 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653901816361 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0535012822964 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118589203845 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466548147213 0.0580467560999 80% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 8.37731958763 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.2 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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