You have a meeting with your manager the next day. Write a letter telling him/her what you are going to discuss in the meeting. In your letter:
-What your have done for the company in the year you worked there.
-What changes you would like to recommend
-What training you require
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to discuss about the brief facts of cyber security project, which I have planned to discuss in tomorrow’s meeting.
At the onset, I would like to inform you that I have been working as a software system analyst for Crypto Solution Private Ltd for the last three years. Since 2020, I have analysed numerous software projects and provided necessary technical support.
Based on my experience, I have realised that there is a lack of security laws in our organisation. As infringement of privacy policy remain the main concern in our company, there is an urgent need to encrypt information. In order to secure data and avoid malicious attacks, an security awareness week would be beneficial for employees to behave responsibly while working with critical systems.
I have made a research on this project and concluded that I need a certification in information security. If I would gain enough knowledge about cyber crime prevention, I would certainly be able to teach other employees regarding the same.
I am hoping to see you in upcoming event.
Yours Sincerely
John Milton
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 143, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nfringement of privacy policy remain the main concern in our company, there is an...
^^
Line 4, column 275, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...ecure data and avoid malicious attacks, an security awareness week would be benefi...
^^
Line 5, column 13, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...ing with critical systems. I have made a research on this project and concluded that I ne...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing event. Yours Sincerely John Milton
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06486486486 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84928963505 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.659459459459 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6036993981 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189273685457 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0667790331289 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470621781903 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923502790297 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386880650248 0.0580467560999 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.65 7.59969072165 127% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.