You have organised to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
1. tell them how much you are looking forward to the holiday
2. explain why you must change your plans
3. suggest alternative arrangements
Dear Baljeet,
I hope you and Gaurav are doing well. I still cherish the time we enjoyed last year while at your home for your marriage, that was the occasion when we committed ourselves to visit Paris on my 30th birthday. But with much disappointment, I am writing to inform you that we might have to postpone the trip.
I was really looking forward to spending some time with the new couple and to usher in my 30th birthday at the top of Eiffel tower. However, I have been recently promoted to team lead position and has been offered to move to Amsterdam for a month. Things changed rather quickly and to my benefit. I would be leaving for Amsterdam on 22nd July and would return after a month, though, no confirmation about return date has been made yet.
If it suits you, I would suggest postponing the planned trip towards the end of the year and to a new location as it would be all snow in Europe. Probably, we can think about going to Thailand to ring in the new year. Also, we all will be having our Christmas holidays, so there won’t be much pain with regards to leaves from the job.
I am sorry for this sudden change in the plan and am really looking forward to a year end trip with you. Moreover, you can suggest some destinations of your choice and then we can finalize the trip.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Best Regards,
Bhawna Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, moreover, really, so, still, then, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1133.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.47826086957 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.35011400215 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 127.690721649 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581027667984 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 330.3 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1450362633 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.9285714286 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0714285714 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42857142857 4.34317383033 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231180679292 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805229776851 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0634396951599 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152044341575 0.12726935374 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761827813198 0.0580467560999 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.