You have a pen pal and you are writing your first letter to that pen pal. In your letter, describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests. Also, tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear Anna,
Hello, how are you. Hope you are having a joyous time. I am very excited in writing this first letter to you to describe myself in more detail.
I live in Delhi which is the capital of India. It is considered to be a popular tourist attraction with many attractive monuments and architectural places.
Regarding my education I completed my graduation in Bachelor in Business Administration from Amity University and soon after that i finished my post-graduation in Masters in Business Administration from Delhi University. I started working as an Assistant Manager in IDFC Mutual Funds for three year and after that got promoted to the position of Senior Manager in the same company.
Currently, I am also working as an editor in Freelancer Company and you can view my article in online at Freelancer.com. Moreover, my hobby is to play badminton in the sports club. Furthermore, I like to spend my free time in painting and sketching sceneries and portraits. I hope someday I will organise an exhibition of my master pieces.
I will be planning to visit next year in summers. I hope we will spend some good quality time together and will have lot of fun.
Tale care and see you soon.
With love,
Prabhpreet Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...om Amity University and soon after that i finished my post-graduation in Masters ...
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Line 11, column 51, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...planning to visit next year in summers. I hope we will spend some good quality ti...
^
Line 17, column 16, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...you soon. With love, Prabhpreet Kaur
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1033.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89573459716 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97032786825 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635071090047 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 290.88556701 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.478312981 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8666666667 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0666666667 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131578477419 0.216113520407 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0480739593837 0.0766984524023 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480008336324 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0756173827197 0.12726935374 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067452648055 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 41.2886597938 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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