You have read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect. Write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
- Correct the information in the article
- Explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
- Suggest what the magazine should do about the situation
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to take into your kind consideration that the information provided in an article about my hometown is not the accurate one as things have changed a lot recently due to the new Government.
As you did mention that the city doesn’t have a proper public transport facility to commute, whereas the transport authority has recently introduced a public bus transit system that covers the 150 kilometers routes from northwest to east. Due to this, most people now prefer to travel via the above-mentioned mode of transport which leads to less traffic conjunction in the town. Since my home town is trying to increase the tourism in the city which would create employment for local resident; therefore, it is vital to provide the accurate information in the global magazine to attract people from across the globe, so they could choose my town as their next holiday destination to spend leisure time with kith and kin.
I would suggest if you could please update the information highlighted above, and publish it again in your upcoming travel magazine.
I would be available on 124536525 if you would like to talk for more updates.
Best Regards,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1009.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07035175879 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73373300249 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668341708543 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 16.3608247423 202% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 102.413527487 44.8134815571 229% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 168.166666667 76.5299724578 220% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.1666666667 16.8248392259 197% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233925610643 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0883989330183 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0856775640868 0.0603063233224 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138759846749 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.09083511469 0.0580467560999 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.0 8.37731958763 227% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.44 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 7.45979381443 201% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 8.71597938144 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 7.59969072165 122% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 8.62886597938 220% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 15.2 8.54432989691 178% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 8.15463917526 233% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.