You have recently bought a toy online and after receiving it you discovered a problem with it. Write a letter to the online store you bought it from and say:
- Describe the toy
- explain the problem
- suggest how it could be solved
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to regretfully inform you about an issue with my recent purchase from your online store. The item delivered yesterday and unfortunately, I extremely dissatisfied with it because of the issues I have outlined below.
I had ordered was a battery operated red Disney figurine last Thursday. It was meant to be a gift for my son's upcoming birthday next month. However, on unwrapping the package, I found a hairline crack across the face of the action figure. Moreover, the toy seemed used and refurbished. Furthermore, the toy seemed to be non-functional. Initially, I presumed that there could be an issue with batteries but it refused to work even on replacing the batteries with new ones.
I am incredibly disappointed with your quality check, shipping and delivery process. Therefore, I believe that your prestigious organization should rectify this issue immediately by collecting and replacing the delivered doll with a brand new functioning model. Please call or revert to arrange a mutually convenient time for delivery.
Hoping to receive a prompt and favourable response.
Yours sincerely,
Praneet K Nadar
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- test 11
- Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? 61
- Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is the most important thing to succeed in life? 56
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 981.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33152173913 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07225814102 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690217391304 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6753636382 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4615384615 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.1538461538 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 4.34317383033 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169825986065 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.049185066376 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629320121692 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921691782834 0.12726935374 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.074615084755 0.0580467560999 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.04 8.71597938144 150% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 41.2886597938 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.