You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend.
Explain why you have moved
Describe a new house
Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to inform you that I’ve finally got a new job in Dnepr city. Thus, there was a necessity to sell my old house and buy a new one closer to my new work. Sorry to say, it was not so simple as it seems. Eventually, I’ve adapted to the new place and want to share my impression with you.
The new house of mine is much bigger than old one. There are a lot of space to play for my young charges. They look very happy, when playing on a lawn in the yard. There are for rooms in the house, including lounge, a big kitchen, a wide hallway. All of the rooms are furnished.
I also want to tell you, that my new company will give 3 days off during the forthcoming holidays. I’ve been thinking a lot and decided that it would be great if your family joins me on the holidays. You’d see my new place, fry some barbeques on my new grill, attend some excursion in Dnepr and just have some fun. There are a lot of interested places to visit here. So, you have a few days to speculate.
Looking forward for your answer.
Your sincerely,
James
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 248, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: All the
... lounge, a big kitchen, a wide hallway. All of the rooms are furnished. I also want to ...
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'finally', 'if', 'look', 'so', 'thus']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.188976377953 0.220444632235 86% => OK
Verbs: 0.149606299213 0.167888034529 89% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0787401574803 0.0606518309736 130% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0511811023622 0.0506257000042 101% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0984251968504 0.118615021944 83% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0905511811024 0.107062808482 85% => OK
Participles: 0.0236220472441 0.041066498444 58% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.28301956609 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0393700787402 0.0385302599488 102% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00132118243153 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0826771653543 0.0714148451538 116% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00787401574803 0.0191574576366 41% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00393700787402 0.00930345855455 42% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1085.0 1141.60824742 95% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.134020619 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26699029126 5.53046319177 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78085437643 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.21359223301 0.284621296913 75% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.150485436893 0.211203875043 71% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.106796116505 0.133321485273 80% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.0825242718447 0.0843313296314 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28301956609 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.622163163488 100% => OK
Word variations: 62.2802820791 62.8969750728 99% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 12.9587628866 123% => OK
Sentence length: 12.875 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.7094823186 44.7399317507 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8125 90.9928171075 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.875 16.4300151701 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.375 0.613754768223 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.09278350515 48% => OK
Readability: 27.9235436893 37.5504026743 74% => OK
Elegance: 1.01315789474 1.13073093955 90% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271225592672 0.331212695627 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0793479187975 0.0927372745006 86% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0654226681498 0.0736520305886 89% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.510539874909 0.579516596996 88% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.169904546573 0.180689518051 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977700607514 0.122183219658 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793485878134 0.0765303033291 104% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.125265671522 0.211926503985 59% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0748900049815 0.0737400523855 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151722908279 0.203819188451 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104592876605 0.067151250289 156% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.45360824742 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.48453608247 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.0206185567 149% => OK
Positive topic words: 7.0 4.73195876289 148% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 1.03092783505 0% => OK
Neutral topic words: 5.0 2.56701030928 195% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 8.32989690722 144% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.