You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter,
explain why you have moved
describe the new house
invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Cathie,
How are you? I am fine and hope to hear from you the same. Recently, I have moved to a new apartment and thought of inviting you for the weekend.
Initially, I was staying in my relative's house, and I was not comfortable over there. Moreover, that place was far away from my office, and my total travel time was more than two hours. Hence, my productivity at the office was also declining, as I was very fatigued. So, I took an apartment near my office and thus saved my travel time.
This apartment has a myriad of features; It is a 10 story building with 6 apartments on each floor. I took a 1 BHK apartment on the fourth floor. Besides, there is a supermarket on the ground floor, where I can pull in anything when I am running out of any item. On top of that, there is a video door system in all apartments. This ensures to identify any visitors before letting them inside. My apartment is fully furnished with all the basics things at home.
I was unable to invite you earlier, as I was staying in my relative's house. I would happy if you could come over here for the weekend and I am sure we will have great fun. Bye and take care.
Your friend,
Ranjini
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that place was far away from my office, and my total travel time was more than t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 967.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31696428571 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44792299898 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.8936437799 44.8134815571 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.8823529412 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1764705882 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.52941176471 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125344948247 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495656401716 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791967516191 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932152856031 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0986906709036 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.68 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.