You have recently moved to a different house.
Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
• Explain why you have moved
• Describe the new house
• Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Johnny,
It`s been so long since we met last month. Everything should be fine since you have returned to your native suburb in England. I`m writing to inform you that I have just moved to a new house in the city center.
Although I was happy with my old house, I had a rental problem with my previous house lord. I decided to move to a new bigger house, when he had informed me with the increase of the monthly rent. However, I did have money to fund the full payment for my new house, I took a mortgage from the bank. Mortgage documentation were a lot, but my family was very supportive to take this step. The new house is a fantastic accommodation, it is also accommodated all my family.
You know that my family is quit big, so I chose a large house with two floors, one big kitchen and garden where my kids will be having enough area to play with their peers. My wife is also fascinated with the living room decoration as it belongs to the aristocratic century. I can not forget to tell you about the balcony as you will be enjoyed sitting in it during the sunset.
Why do not you come and visit us? I am inviting you to come over any time when you will be available and have a coffee catch up together, but please inform me to be ready with all family.
Seeing you,
Ayoub
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.48453608247 174% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 247.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32388663968 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.36288151094 2.54303337028 93% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603238866397 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.010538281 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.2857142857 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6428571429 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243315958365 0.216113520407 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093716747671 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729796294098 0.0603063233224 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154644395567 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568735838289 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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