You have recently moved into a new house You want to tell your friend about your good news Write to your friend In the letter Describe the house Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house

Essay topics:

You have recently moved into a new house. You want to tell your friend about your good news.

Write to your friend. In the letter:

• Describe the house.

• Describe the neighbourhood.

• Invite your friend to come and see the house.

Dear Chris,

I'm sure you are enjoying the best of your life in Manchester. I am glad to share my recent experience of shifting to a new house and would love if you could join me for a week or two.

Remember, how upset I was, when I last wrote to you? My previous landlord ordered me to leave the house immediately due to some of her concerns. However, I am happy now, the house I got is more like my dream house in the suburbs of London. It's rental accommodation, I have one-bed room, a spacious lounge and a beautiful backyard where I can show off my gardening skills.

Luckily, I got the best location, there are lush green fields all around my house. For this reason, the air is quite fresh and noise-free. There are very fewer houses nearby and the neighbours are quite welcoming. Interestingly, there is a grocery store and a library at the walk of 5 minutes, and to me, these are all the basic requirements to spent peaceful days here.

I know you are too busy with your studies, but I would be pleased if you can pay a visit for few days, you will definitely love the house. I am sure together we will explore the area around. We can either go for a walk or do a party in the fields. It will be refreshing for you too.

I am eagerly waiting for your reply, and the dates of your arrival.

Best wishes buddy,

John.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Chris, Im sure you are enjoying the best of you...
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Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
Dear Chris, Im sure you are enjoying the best of your ...
^^
Line 23, column 19, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...f your arrival. Best wishes buddy, John.
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1101.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 253.0 206.0 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35177865613 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48005369147 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600790513834 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8068756315 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.8125 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.25 4.34317383033 29% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167956582133 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500047243536 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689654378415 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107031762011 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665527860189 0.0580467560999 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 8.71597938144 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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