you have recently seen an add on college notice board about computer course and you are interested in it
write a letter to your college head of department
Dear Sir,
Hope you are doing well. my name is john, a 2nd year student pursuing mechanical engineering and I am writing in reference to inform you of my interest to enroll in the computer course " Advanced microsoft Package" which i recently saw on the college notice board.
To elucidate I have a keen interest to participate in this computer course though I have never studied computing in depth additionally as you are aware that I have not completed my elementary course so it will difficult for me to enroll for this course.
Hence I request you to make a special exception for my case as I would like to enroll and gain more knowledge on this subject as they will teach how to use the excel and visio in detail. additionally as you are aware that computers are being used in our day to day lives and gaining knowledge on microsoft excel and visio would definitely aid in preparation of projects and presentations work in our academic curriculum.
I look forward to your response and immediate assistance on this issue.
Yours sincerely
john
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| 2019-02-06 | vinshu koul | 78 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. my name is john...
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Suggestion: My
Dear Sir, Hope you are doing well. my name is john, a 2nd year student pursui...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...lt for me to enroll for this course. Hence I request you to make a special excepti...
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...s subject as they will teach how to use the excel and visio in detail. additionally as yo...
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Suggestion: Additionally
...w to use the excel and visio in detail. additionally as you are aware that computers are bei...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: additionally,
...w to use the excel and visio in detail. additionally as you are aware that computers are bei...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ations work in our academic curriculum. I look forward to your response and imme...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...and immediate assistance on this issue. Yours sincerely john
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Suggestion:
...stance on this issue. Yours sincerely john
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 890.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81081081081 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82023368577 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 95.7795086943 44.8134815571 214% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.142857143 76.5299724578 166% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4285714286 16.8248392259 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255581455355 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102039172165 0.0766984524023 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685491926882 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136222386844 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0867914015014 0.0580467560999 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 8.37731958763 172% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.