You have recently started work in a new company.
Write a letter to a friend. In your letter
- Explain why you changed your jobs
-Describe your new job
-Tell him/her your other news.
Dear Jenny,
I hope this finds you and your family well. I am sorry to not keep in touch recently because I am so busy at the new workplace that I barely have time for other activities.
Do you remember that I was working at a small coffee shop before? Well, I just quit my job after a whole year of attachment. Three months ago, the cafe laid off most of the employees and just kept only me working, so I often had to work overtime with very little pay. Then, I got a job offer from an insurance company which was looking for a new office assistant. I have been working here for almost a month.
My job is multi-tasking, which asks me a good strategy of time management to complete my tasks on time. My first week was so messy and stressful, but everything seems fine now. My co-workers are very nice and helpful. They always try to support me as much as they can.
Anyway, I have to stop now because I am going out with my cousin to select a white dress for her coming wedding. She sends you a lot of love and hopes to see you soon. I hope so, too.
With love,
Wendy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ressful, but everything seems fine now. My co-workers are very nice and helpful. T...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, first, look, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 210.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.12857142857 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29069398034 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8381444822 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 57.8 76.5299724578 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 4.34317383033 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173497144088 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04929917185 0.0766984524023 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497204190751 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104188663456 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630271567043 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.0 8.37731958763 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.36 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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