You have recently used a moving company to move your household items to a new place and they have been damaged in transfer. Write a letter to the company’s manager and say
When and where did it take place ?
What is your complaint?
Suggest a reasonable solution
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to lodge a complaint about the services I took from BAX Logistics Ltd to shift my house belongings to a new residence. The order was placed on 5th March 19 in Delhi and items were picked up on the next day itself to be delivered in a week’s time at Bangalore as discussed.
While unpacking the cartons at the new address, I was really shocked to see few of the items were destroyed or were in worse condition, i.e., my fridge which was only 4 months old, had a strong dent on the front which is clearly visible and looks awful. The Microwave which was recently gifted by a relative has a crack on the front glass and now it is of no use. I had a dinner set consisting of 12 unique cutlery and half of them had been broken.
Though it puts you in a situation of anger and grief, I would strongly recommend digging out for the cause of what has happened in my case. Have a control over labor that was involved in the transportation. As a reputed logistics company, I have immense trust that, I would receive the reimbursement of the damaged goods soon.
I look forward to hearing from you at the earliest.
Regards
Vivek
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, really, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 957.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38990825688 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56262772432 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642201834862 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 292.5 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.796630005 44.8134815571 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.333333333 76.5299724578 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2222222222 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 4.34317383033 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129592658305 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0436947922028 0.0766984524023 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0234208906279 0.0603063233224 39% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687490223255 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317141841457 0.0580467560999 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 8.62886597938 197% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.