Some students have rented the apartment next to yours. Their parties are upsetting you, your family and other tenants.
Write a letter to the owner of the apartment. In your letter:
• describe the problem
• explain how the problem is affecting you, your family and other tenants
• say what you would like the owner of the apartment to do.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to put forward my concerns in relation to the rented acquaintances next to our apartment. From past 3 weeks, these pupils are unnecessarily playing loud music and creating nuisance in the block and affecting me and my family.
Firstly, every day and night and so forth, they invite many people to the apartment who creates the environment as of a fish market. The noise level is unacceptable and continues until mid-night and sometimes till morning. This is especially hindering my kids who are preparing for their exams next month. Also, me and my wife have been deprived of getting a sound sleep after getting off from work exhausted, just due to peculiar behavior of fellow neighbors. I tried to talk to them, but they are rather impolite and rude.
I highly recommend you take some action as per resident’s welfare association act or talk to them in person to stop being oblivious of the people living in the society. I would be grateful for your prompt action and look forward for your cooperation.
Yours faithfully
Vivek
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 175, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...us of the people living in the society. I would be grateful for your prompt actio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96721311475 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74911727544 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.704918032787 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 270.9 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3277047627 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.9 76.5299724578 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3 16.8248392259 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15323148698 0.216113520407 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555513141637 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0540911491897 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840941250066 0.12726935374 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.036124243236 0.0580467560999 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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