Do you agree or disagree with the following statement: "Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.”
It is often believed that the life lived in the past by our grandparents is much easier compared to the present life. I somewhat disagree with the notion as people wistfully out to think that life was much sorted before. Nowadays, life is well organized according to my opinion in a certain way which I would explore further in this essay.
Firstly, the current generation is gifted with the unique technology which earlier groups were deprived of. Technology has been a boon to the society and has made human life accessible to all circumstances. In the past, people use to travel shorter distances in an enormous amount of time. However, in the current scenario, it’s vice-versa. For instance, to travel from one city to another city in India, train is the most convenient option for most and it takes almost 8-10 hours to cover 300 Kms of distance. In comparison to todays rail tracks and better infrastructure, the same distance gets covered in 4-5 hours. Moreover, internet has made our life much resilient where we do not face any hardships while communicating with others and can make strong bonding within no time.
Secondly, earlier people used to be very hardworking and there used to be only one earning hand to take care of the entire family. They had to work for 6 days a week and stretching their daily hours as well for more savings. However, today individuals of my age group only work for 5 days a week and receives full salary. Earlier generations were focused on one job and continue to expect promotion from it but as compared to todays youth, they are hopping jobs and field of interest without any distress. Folks nowadays are more tolerant towards future and possess the knowledge in certain areas and can easily adapt to the situation where it demands.
To end it, in my consideration, life is organized and more flexible as compared to the rigid and adamant lifestyle of previous age group. With the effective and efficient use of today’s technology, many people take the leisure of advance living and better lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 228, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... all circumstances. In the past, people use to travel shorter distances in an enorm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1721.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88920454545 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66701906676 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596590909091 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0840160056 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.235294118 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7058823529 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119311341454 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0362898774313 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.03089268822 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725178070619 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.012945048587 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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