You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child.
Write a letter to the parents. In your letter
explain why you would like the job
give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ
say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Shwatank Bhasin, and I live in India. I am writing in response to your advertisement which was posted in Australian Magazine past two days. I have prior experience in tutoring at school and I would like to have a part-time job once I move to Australia. Your house is located 10 minutes away from the University of Newcastle where I start my master's degree in engineering. And, I am very keen to look after your child with my best care and attention.
Since I have teaching experience in tutoring primary school pupils, I would be the best applicant for this part-time job. Besides, I have babysat more than twice while I was pursuing my bachelor's in engineering in India. I love to spend time around children because it is so delightful to be around them. Apart from this, my academic results are exceptionally high, as a result, you will not face any problems in terms of communication with you and your lovely child whom I had seen in the magazine.
In most of the time in Australia, I will be occupied studying for my master's degree as well as working in any part-time job. However, during my leisure time, I would like to go and see the breathtaking views of the Australian coastal cities and it's nature. Also, I like to hangouts in clubs and restaurants, especially in new places. Therefore, it would be a great chance to explore new things while I will be living in Australia.
I hope you will approve me to babysit your child for the next six months as per the time of part-time job advertisement that you posted in the magazine.
I am hoping to hear a positive response to this letter.
Yours sincerely,
Shwatank Bhasin
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, look, so, therefore, well, while, apart from, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 32.9175257732 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 26.3917525773 182% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 937.175257732 147% => OK
No of words: 299.0 206.0 145% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6220735786 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75201863351 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 127.690721649 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548494983278 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 290.88556701 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 17.0 9.13402061856 186% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6745417192 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.375 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6875 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8125 4.34317383033 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250682812128 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0735725679465 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616858426526 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140974886876 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678110343559 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.52 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.