Dear Mr and Mrs Smith,
My name is Sagar Chokshi and I came across your advertisement in Times of Australia newspaper regarding an opportunity for teaching job. Based on the requirements mentioned in this article, I found myself most suitable person and would like to apply for the same.
I have been teaching Hindi language in school for past 5 years of New Era School as assistant professor. I am from India and Hindi is my native language. Although, I have been living here since 2010, I always read books in Hindi so that I do not loose my grasp in Hindi.
Moreover, I see that you have other requirements from the person, too and want them to help you in baby-sitting if needed. I love kids and that is why I was baby-sitting at small wonder, daycare for toddler. I am flexible with other duties as well to help you in chores.
I love kids and prefer to give direction to their life from early childhood. Also, I love my native language and prefer to pass my knowledge of Hindi. As one said, knowledge is meant to be share with everyone and I am firm believer of that.
Please let me know if you have any questions. Look forward to hearing from you soon.
Sincerely,
Sagar Chokshi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 247, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ys read books in Hindi so that I do not loose my grasp in Hindi. Moreover, I see t...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...uties as well to help you in chores. I love kids and prefer to give direction ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, regarding, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54128440367 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57443681977 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605504587156 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4078459521 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.7142857143 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280675276311 0.216113520407 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823232199282 0.0766984524023 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0583362639999 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119514569601 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0791813921171 0.0580467560999 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 8.71597938144 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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