Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Sagar Chokshi, I booked your Hotel Hilton for one day meeting for my organization on October 25th, 2020. As our guests were not satisfied with the food service we received, I am writing you this letter.
First of all, participants love the facade of the building as well as location. Although, it is right in the middle of the downtown, they were fascinated by the availability of parking in hotel. Also, I remember everyone was appreciating the facilities provided by hotel and staff members. Moreover, they loved the ambience and free access to lounge.
Though, everything was great, the food that were served at lunch time was cold. As a result, we needed to contact staff to reheat our food which lead to delay in lunch time. Nevertheless, as we all know, reheated food did not taste great. Also, few people made comments about food being bland in taste.
All in all, I would suggest you to look into this and if possible wait for call from event organizers before putting food out. Also, make sure to know about food preference of people or at least provide wide variety of range.
Let me know if you need any more information. Thank you for your time.
Sincerely,
Sagar Chokshi
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, at least, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 215.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75348837209 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48388641553 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66511627907 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.7251177742 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1333333333 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 4.34317383033 160% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338411002815 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919714036993 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546202913535 0.0603063233224 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162539426805 0.12726935374 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0433196379085 0.0580467560999 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.