Dear Sam,
I am so excited with your decision to pursue Masters of Science in Computer Science field. I have studied same from New York University and will be happy to give you some information about it as well as tips.
First of all, let me tell you about few important courses that I have taken in my time. The most important one is Data-structures and algorithms from professor Arton. In programming world, this is being used widely and you need to have better grasp on this topic. Other than that I would recommand taking lectures about programming in python and introduction to operating systems.
I will highly recommand New York University as its Computer Science course is immaculate and highly recognized by everyone. Nevertheless, they rank in top 10 for their course work in Computer Science field. Professors are really helpful and they go above and beyond to help their students.
Lastly, few things I would like to mention about applying for their program. You need to send application fee which is $50 along with your transcript of bachelors before March 15th for fall term. They scutinize last moment applications so sending application before deadline of 15th April is wise decision.
If you need any help in the process, do let me know.
Take care.
Love,
Sagar Chokshi
P.S. Hope to see you soon here with me. I wish you had made this decision sooner and we would have been studying together.
- You work for an international company and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country Write a letter to your manager In your letter Explain why you want to work in the company s head office for six months Say how your work 89
- In some area of the US a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult What is your opinion on this 84
- In their advertising businesses nowadays usually emphasize that their products are new in some way What is this Do you think it is a positive or negative development 89
- A museum near your home is looking for people to do part time voluntary work You would like to do voluntary work at the museum Write a letter to the museum director to apply for work In your letter 1 Explain what you want to do voluntary work at the museu 89
- In many countries paying for things using mobile phone apps is becoming increasingly common Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., do let me know. Take care. Love, Sagar Chokshi P.S. Hope to see you so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, nevertheless, really, so, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 937.175257732 127% => OK
No of words: 243.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90946502058 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62866021532 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633744855967 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 290.88556701 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.1777283506 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5333333333 76.5299724578 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225401369117 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631743255393 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489038465189 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104860847793 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0426549575438 0.0580467560999 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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