In contemporary era, I have started seeing this change where people prefer to visit their own country rather than travel abroad on holiday. So, I would say that this trend will continue in future and my views are elucidated in ensuing paragraphs.
Expounding on the formal, first and the far most reason I believe is that due to modernization. World is getting smaller and smaller within 24 hours you can reach almost any place on this planet which lead people to migrant to different part of the world for better opportunity and life. This leaves their relatives, friends and collegues behind them. Considering this whenever there is holiday, they prefer to meet them. For instance, I have been living in USA for past 7 years and I visit India every year to meet all of them. In addition to that, traveling to their home country is very economical. Having their parents house or even their own house, they do not need to spend money on expensive three or five stars hotels. Nevertheless, visiting relatives and friends saves money on meals because everyone invites them on lunches and dinners.
Moreover, people prefer to keep and enjoy their traditional values and pass on to their children. The true nature of their festivals can been seen only in their native country. For examples, I love my traditional festival Navaratri in which we do folk dance around statue of godess Ambe. I do not get same vibes and values if I am celebrating it in USA. Also, some people believe that it is their responsibility to take care of their old parents who find it difficult to stay in different country. Staying and taking care of their parents by visting them on different holidays is important for them.
Pondering on later, I do think that it is gives great feeling to visit new places and explore the world, meet to people and learn about their cultures but it tend to be very expensive. It is considered as luxury and as we all know, not everyone can afford it.
To recapituate, it is quite conspicuous that people will prefer to spend holiday in their own country for various reasons such as family and traditional values as well as economical situation and will continue in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[4]
Message: Did you mean 'can be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: can be; has been
...ren. The true nature of their festivals can been seen only in their native country. For ...
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Line 7, column 159, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'tends'?
Suggestion: tends
...e and learn about their cultures but it tend to be very expensive. It is considered ...
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Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: ECONOMICAL_ECONOMIC[1]
Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
...amily and traditional values as well as economical situation and will continue in future.
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Line 9, column 211, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... economical situation and will continue in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 55.0 24.0651302605 229% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76578947368 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5546587176 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 212.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557894736842 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 563.4 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7100114042 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3157894737 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05263157895 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278396604559 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0806940666143 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721480814856 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168860898841 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0680360998763 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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