You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.
Write a letter to the couple. In your letter,
1. Explain why you think you would be suitable for the job.
2. Say what else you could do for the family.
3. Give your reasons for wanting the job.
Dear Mrs Bakley,
I am writing this letter with reference to your advertisement in the newspaper, and I would like to express my interest in teaching your children Hindi language.
I believe I have enough knowledge about this subject, as I have completed my bachelors with specialization in the same language. Moreover, Hindi is my mother-tongue, so I can teach them well about this language.
Also, I have some good experience in teaching secondary kids, and It has been 5 years that I am into this profession. Apart from teaching my vernacular language, I can also teach other important subjects such as science and mathematics, which will be quite helpful to you.
I have recently moved to Australia, and I am looking for a good part time job. Teaching is the one that always interests me. In this way, I can spend my idle time which will be helpful in settling the financial crisis which I am facing.
I hope you will consider me suitable for this position. I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Aditi Gakhar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
... Australia, and I am looking for a good part time job. Teaching is the one that always in...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, second, so, well, apart from, such as, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 860.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80446927374 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84660856112 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608938547486 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 264.6 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3494133242 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.1818181818 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2727272727 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.09090909091 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23371870073 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934712661351 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0669305117955 0.0603063233224 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139719204206 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793985076217 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.26 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.