Dear Mr Georgy,
I am writing this letter in connection to the advert which you had given in the Australian daily newspaper this week regarding the need for a Malayalam language tuition teacher for your children for this whole year.
I would like to apply for this post, not only because Malayalam is my native language, but as I also have a degree in Malayalam language. Hence, I will be able to teach your children more proficiently on all aspects of the language including reading, writing, speaking and advanced language techniques.
Apart from this, I can also carry out personality development and mind rejuvenation theory and practical sessions for your children, as I am also a trained personality development coach. I am sure that I can mend these young minds to lead a productive personal and professional life.
The major reason why I am willing to take up this private tuition lesson for your children is because I recently delivered a baby and I am not in a situation to go for a regular job. Other than this, your house is located in the same street where I am living which will make it easier for me commute as well as take care of my new born child.
Kindly consider me for this post and I am looking forward for your prompt response.
Yours sincerely,
Ms Sruthy Varghese
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...alayalam is my native language, but as I also have a degree in Malayalam language...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, regarding, so, well, apart from, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 937.175257732 115% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73684210526 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69303960166 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614035087719 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 16.3608247423 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.3701432222 44.8134815571 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.0 76.5299724578 157% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3333333333 16.8248392259 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 4.34317383033 182% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27532154208 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110326163709 0.0766984524023 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701066004395 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156610764402 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0672940863485 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 8.37731958763 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 70.7449484536 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 8.54432989691 140% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 8.15463917526 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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