You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to you with reference to the job you advertised on Jobs DB Post (Ref#2900) this Monday.
I am a Year-2 student studying Bachelor of History at the Chinese University of Hong Kong. I worked as a sales at Apple Shop last summer, and I had also private tutorial experiences when I was at Year-1. I can speak English, Cantonese, Mandarin, and Japanese. A reference letter from my supervisor at Apple Shop is attached for your reference.
I am interested in the job advertised because I believe that my knowledge in History can equip me better to work in a Museum. Furthermore, I like to meet people, so I think that the job nature as a shop assistant fits my personality.
I would appreciate it if you could consider me for the job vacancy. If you need any further information, please do not hesitate to contact me at 2999-8888 or my email address of annewong@gmail.com.
Thank for your attention. I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Anne Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 92, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...at the Chinese University of Hong Kong. I worked as a sales at Apple Shop last su...
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Line 9, column 205, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...orial experiences when I was at Year-1. I can speak English, Cantonese, Mandarin,...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, i think, with reference to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85714285714 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0730108881 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.651428571429 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.277001438 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8333333333 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5833333333 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91666666667 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256067349909 0.216113520407 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0881946618263 0.0766984524023 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.060161765853 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136916688228 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305640718928 0.0580467560999 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.