You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.
Write a letter to the director of the Museum. In your letter,
introduce yourself
explain what experience and special skills you have
explain why you are interested in the job
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing this letter in reference to your advertisement published in 'The Tribune' english newspaper about recruitment for the post of a guide at City Museum shop.
First, I would like to introduce myself. my name is Ankita and I am presently pursuing a degree in the field of Archeology. I have visited this shop a plethora of time during my tertiary education.
However, I do not have any generous experience in this sector, but I have been awarded by the state government for doing a great job in an exhibition sponsored by it. Otherwise, I possess many other skills like providing a welcoming, hospitable environment and conveying the useful information to the tourists.
The reason why I want to join you is that I want to gain a valuable experience during my winter holidays; related to my studies. Moreover, it will help me to carry out some of my expenses.
In an anticipation of your prompt reply.
Thanking you
Yours sincerely
Ankita Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 42, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: My
...irst, I would like to introduce myself. my name is Ankita and I am presently pursu...
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Line 9, column 35, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[4]
Message: The pronoun 'you' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'be'
Suggestion: be
...ts. The reason why I want to join you is that I want to gain a valuable experien...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 821.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85798816568 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92749348925 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 127.690721649 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674556213018 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8841016112 44.8134815571 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292784582167 0.216113520407 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085785679271 0.0766984524023 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0759069384186 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13338364626 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0673922755222 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.61 8.71597938144 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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