You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You have decided to apply for the job.
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter for the post of supervisor in the City Museum as a part-time job. I have seen your advert in the local newspaper on 14th of April and decided to apply for the position.
In addition, I am a full-time student at Oxford University pursuing Masters in Mass Communication having student ID-789TY. We have summer holidays starting from 1st of May and I would be free for one month. I have one year experience as a volunteer in social club where I had worked as a guide for Japanese people. Furthermore, I have done diploma in language of french and as mentioned in your advertisement there is vacancy for the individual having good communication skills in this.
Moreover, I am a diligent person and have a knowledge of all the interpersonal and qualifications that is needed for this post. I have been awarded with best student award in the last academic year for the best contribution in developing the social clubs for overseas students.
Hope to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Micheal Jay.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing this letter for the post of...
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Line 7, column 149, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the best'.
Suggestion: with the best
...eded for this post. I have been awarded with best student award in the last academic year...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... hearing from you. Yours Faithfully, Micheal Jay.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 869.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85474860335 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94372592127 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620111731844 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8333206591 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338529954474 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121702869075 0.0766984524023 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0682038646668 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196398934177 0.12726935374 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0848674664044 0.0580467560999 146% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 8.37731958763 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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