You just moved to a new place and haven’t gotten a chance to tell your friend. Write a letter to your friend.
In your letter, you should say:
• where and when you move there
• the differences between your new place and the previous place
• why you move there.
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you well. If you remember in my last letter, I had mentioned that I was looking for new apartment as the lease of my old apartment was due to expire and the daily commute to my workplace was challenging. Happy to share that I have found a well-furnished studio apartment on 5th Avenue of city centre, and I have moved to my new apartment on 15th December.
I am so happy that finally I have rented an apartment that has a lot of amenities like gymnasium, spa, swimming pool and a pet friendly garden compared to my old apartment that had just a garden which also was not maintained up to the standards. Additionally, my new apartment has a club where the residents can host parties and get to gather. I was thinking that I will host my birthday party this year in this club, and I think we all will have a great time.
The other good part of moving in this new apartment is that it is close to my workplace. My travel time has drastically reduce, I now reach my office in 15 minutes compared to the old one where I use to take 1 hour to travel one way. Finally, I am glad that now I get to spend more time with my dog and play violin. I was thinking if you can come and visit me next month. There are many good restaurants and night clubs near my area and I am sure we both will have a great time.
Give my regards to your parent. I look forward to hearing from you.
- These days some people spend a lot of money on tickets to go to sporting or cultural events Do you think this is a positive or negative development To what extent do you support this development 91
- Today it is common practice for many business meetings and business training to take place online. Do the advantages of this new development outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Some think that teenagers should follow older people s rules Others thinks that it is natural for them to challenge what older people say Discuss both views and give your opinion 93
- Some parents believe that children in their leisure should be involved in educational activities. While others believe it adds to much pressure on children. Discuss both views and give your opinion. 73
- Nowadays most people are not as fit and active, as they were in the past. What are the main causes of this situation? Suggest some possible solutions. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 121, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'reduced'.
Suggestion: reduced
...rkplace. My travel time has drastically reduce, I now reach my office in 15 minutes co...
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Line 7, column 197, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...minutes compared to the old one where I use to take 1 hour to travel one way. Final...
^^^
Line 9, column 69, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt. I look forward to hearing from you.
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, so, well, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 3.03092783505 363% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 32.9175257732 152% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1138.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 274.0 206.0 133% => OK
Chars per words: 4.15328467153 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.78020617076 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44377610768 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 127.690721649 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547445255474 0.622605031667 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.0 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.1398629393 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5384615385 76.5299724578 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 16.8248392259 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130556737726 0.216113520407 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606365985955 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470313175709 0.0603063233224 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101348977941 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535419419573 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 8.37731958763 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 70.7449484536 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.79 8.71597938144 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.7 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.