You learnt that there is self-funded vet hospital that cures various illness of animals free of cost. This hospital is struggling to raise funds these days. Write a letter to leading newspaper editor appealing the community for donation.
In your letter
1) Explain the situation
2) Say what actions you would like the newspaper to take
3) Describe negatives to convince the newspaper editor
Dear Sir/Madam
I am writing this letter to appeal to you, to use your place as a newspaper editor to reach out to the community for financial aid, for the vet hospital that tends to animals for free in the coterie. The clinic Is experiencing a major set back as it is a self funded hospital.
Firstly, they have run out of resources and materials such syringes, needles, lancet and drugs. materials needed to fend for the animals. Finally, they are finding it difficult to sustain the clinic like light bill, doctors salary, gas bill are a challenge to pay. I would like the media to publish an article about the hospital, it’s good works over the years and the present situation it is facing presently. So the community can reach out to them with funds, as the community benefits from it.
In conclusion, I wish you consider this plea as no one wants their pets dead as a result of lack of medical care. As it is a delicate issue.
Yours Faithfully,
Janet Jones
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir/Madam I am writing this letter to appeal to yo...
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...t back as it is a self funded hospital. Firstly, they have run out of resources ...
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...ch syringes, needles, lancet and drugs. materials needed to fend for the animals. Finall...
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...es, needles, lancet and drugs. materials needed to fend for the animals. Finally,...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ad as a result of lack of medical care. As it is a delicate issue. Yours Fa...
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...edical care. As it is a delicate issue. Yours Faithfully, Janet Jones
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...delicate issue. Yours Faithfully, Janet Jones
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, if, so, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 817.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66857142857 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51363627976 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668571428571 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7101401867 44.8134815571 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7 76.5299724578 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222432482255 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0618123379129 0.0766984524023 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0977602257333 0.0603063233224 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153204532409 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165778911285 0.0580467560999 286% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.