Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to inform you of some of the renovations that you have done recently are not enough and some of the modifications yet to be done.
My name is Rakesh Sharma and I have been living in the area where you are representing in council for nearly ten years, I feel I am extremely well-qualified to give suggestions on how to make it better. Firstly, I would like to say thanks for all the great efforts you have put to get the gym established. It had been a great desire for the local masses especially for the younger generation to get fitness not only physically but also mentally.
However, there are a couple of serious issues associated with it. The first thing to be highlighted is related to maintaining hygiene environment. To elaborate on this, everybody supposed to wear a mask when login to the fitness classes due to the Covid-19 pandemic, but some of the folks are not adhering to this practice. In addition to that, although we have the latest equipment compared to the other fitness centers in the city, the number of pieces is quite low, attendants have to wait for their turn.
For the above reasons, please pass legislation and educate about these in the local meeting to the masses. Therefore, everybody would aware of these precautions to be both fit and healthy. Please let me know if you have any queries.
Yours sincerely,
Rakesh Sharma
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to inform you o...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
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...am writing this letter to inform you of some of the renovations that you have done recently...
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
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...u have done recently are not enough and some of the modifications yet to be done. My na...
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...e of the modifications yet to be done. My name is Rakesh Sharma and I have been...
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...not only physically but also mentally. However, there are a couple of serious i...
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...asses due to the Covid-19 pandemic, but some of the folks are not adhering to this practice...
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...ttendants have to wait for their turn. For the above reasons, please pass legis...
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... let me know if you have any queries. Yours sincerely, Rakesh Sharma
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, therefore, well, i feel, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1169.0 937.175257732 125% => OK
No of words: 248.0 206.0 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71370967742 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68854264918 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.1538066386 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.4166666667 76.5299724578 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6666666667 16.8248392259 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211784624328 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642980901029 0.0766984524023 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598125888549 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126523196083 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0726372572838 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 41.2886597938 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 8.62886597938 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.