It is undeniably true that crime is ubiquitous across the world and unfortunately it is increasing at an alarming rate. While the authorities are making efforts to minimize it, the complexity is increasing. The reasons for this worrying trend need to be analyzed, and ways to diminish this has to be found.
Sociologists are claiming that there are a plethora of reasons related to these. The first point worth making is that related to financial status. To elaborate on this, some of the under-developed countries possess a significant number of underprivileged people and in the dire need to get basic essential items, they would steal from stores such as malls and supermarkets. Although, in many of the situations these would end up as minor, in some of the cases these might become fatal. The second point worth to be pointing out is associates with drug consumption. Of late, people especially the younger generation has been consuming illegal narcotics at an unprecedented level and this provokes them to do offensive actions.
Fortunately, however, there are some steps that both the government and individuals can take to mitigate these problems. The first solution to highlight is that creating jobs for needy people. For instance, recently the Brazil government has allocated a great deal of amount for employment creation in various sectors including service and manufacturing. Surprisingly, the crime rate has been declined rapidly from 28 percent to 14. It should also be mentioned that those who are in human resource ministry has to pass some legislation to reduce and educate people about the penalties of misdeeds.
To conclude, crime is a serious problem that is primarily caused by the lack of basic items and the intake of drugs. Various solutions exist to mitigate including job creation and passing strict laws, but a definite solution has to be found.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, while, as to, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1581.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16666666667 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94088052251 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591503267974 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.2455156644 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.125 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176375576873 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446517103359 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388749513688 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964924906172 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0324485316666 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.