You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
• State what your skills and experience are.
• Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir / Madam
You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to request my acceptance Cultural Expeditions volunteering program. Volunteering for young children has given me an immense sense of satisfaction and I wish to contribute my time to a social cause by teaching language and communication skills to the underprivilidged kids in developing nations.
I would like to teach the English language to young children whose access to primary education is very limited. Also, with my ability to communicate in Hindi and the English language teaching experience of more than five years at the primary school, I can assure you I will be a perfect fit for the task. Additionally coming from a humble background myself, I understand the role that education plays in one's development.
For this social cause, I would like to visit internal villages in Rajasthan, India where the Hindi language is commonly used. I would greatly appreciate if a trip could be arranged to India during my summer vacation i.e. from 1st of July to 25th of August.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Seema
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 307, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
... I will be a perfect fit for the task. Additionally coming from a humble background myself,...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...rstand the role that education plays in ones development. For this social cause,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 918.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18644067797 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08478715231 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655367231638 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.0027321793 44.8134815571 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.0 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.88888888889 4.34317383033 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0955849069938 0.216113520407 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459067716842 0.0766984524023 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496610690616 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0726058954204 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576779908573 0.0580467560999 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 8.37731958763 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.