You live near a record shop that sells music, movies, and books.
Write a letter to the shop asking if they have a few different items that you are looking for.
– Ask what the prices are and if they can be orders
– Ask when they would arrive and if you can have them held in advance.
Dear Sir or Madam
I am writing this letter to request for few specific and unusual products if they are available at your store. I stay near store at Westermind Road and I need music album for Led Zepplin rock collection, Bob Marley Greatest Hits Vol.2. In addition, to mentioned there is also requirement of latest copy of the Fantastic Beasts from J.k Rowling because I am huge fan of her books. Please let me know if they are available.
Consequently, if they are at the store, could you please let me know if they can be ordered via post or online. It will also be good of you if you can provide some information regarding the cost of each item I mentioned above. Also, it would be really grateful of you if any discount on the prices would be provided as I would like to be regular customer at your facility.
Also, I need clarity on when items will reach me from the date when I placed order. Do I need to pay full amount when I place the order or it can be Cash On Delivery.
Looking forward to response from you
Yours faithfully
Sam Williams
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| 2019-10-17 | amanda.mosby | 89 | view |
| 2019-10-01 | Farwah | 85 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 289, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
... to mentioned there is also requirement of latest copy of the Fantastic Beasts from J.k R...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, look, really, regarding, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 882.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.45454545455 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42523653859 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626262626263 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 273.6 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.4437412055 44.8134815571 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0 76.5299724578 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 16.8248392259 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.11111111111 4.34317383033 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294370072502 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120685235052 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542596515503 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165233106572 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717588357544 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.53 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.